Compozerz Story p. 8

I really enjoyed this page. I like the dialog a lot, for one thing.
There are some great one liners in here, I think.

I also like that Brahms is really taking on the father figure role...well, all the guys personalities are represented here, I think. We see how mean and sarcastic Lud is, Wolfgang's giggling at him in panel three, but in panel four when Lud gets thumped by Joe, Wolfgang straightens up...Felix, the kind hearted one, Freddie, the uber-sensitive one. Yep, they are all captured here. Another big reason I really liked this page.

Joe was originally just going to say "Stop making Freddie Cry" in the last panel, but the rest of it came to me as I was writing the words in the speech bubble. I thought that improved it a lot.

A lot more humor than the last page! And it's gonna get funnier (and more outrageous. Trust me on that one).

I am having a blast doing these, and I regret to say I am neglecting some things I really need to do around the house...and car maintenance...that kinda thing. No wonder so many artists are slobs.

Anyhow, hope you like it.

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